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blue eyes like ice,
melting into warm salty drops,
down wrinkles and creases of experience,
onto the flag-covered coffin.
black handkerchiefs,
soaking with faded memories,
absorbing unspoken pride and regrets,
behind the black-mesh veil.
white fresh lilies,
dropping from cold clammy fingers,
upon folds and threads of service,
into the newly-dug earth.
melting into warm salty drops,
down wrinkles and creases of experience,
onto the flag-covered coffin.
black handkerchiefs,
soaking with faded memories,
absorbing unspoken pride and regrets,
behind the black-mesh veil.
white fresh lilies,
dropping from cold clammy fingers,
upon folds and threads of service,
into the newly-dug earth.
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-applauds- I love the song mad world! The slow version and the faster remix, muahaha! -cough-
Anyways, its a very good poem, sad and touching. I like the description and vividness, and can totally envision the scene that's going. Good job myu!
Anyways, its a very good poem, sad and touching. I like the description and vividness, and can totally envision the scene that's going. Good job myu!